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[[[ Reads right to left ]]]  Wasn't quite sure whether to post as 'digital' or 'traditional'... I drew out all the panels and inked them by hand and scanned them, but used Photoshop for my backgrounds/touch-ups/texts... Lawls. What you guys think...? Digital or Traditional...? As far as changes from the original version[which I will move to scraps] goes, I changed all my backgrounds, fixed the texts, attempted to correct my grammars, burned some stuff[with the photoshop tool you foo!], darkened my panel outlines, blurred the mini-panel and completely re-drew the 5th panel  I want to rename my Manga... Desperate for suggestions. If you want to help, I'll tell you the last scene in the plot. [I like to choose epic words that have major meaning to the last scene for titles xDD adds emotional stuffs...]Finally, English translations!! "I'll give you anything you want!""Drugs? Money? Yeah, lots of money!"*gun load*"Please spare me!""Hey.""Anything! Please don't kill me! Women? Fame? What do you say?""Shut it. There is only one thing that I hate."*Shake shake shake*Thanks for reading through my rambling this far xDD Anyways, like last time, there are 7 things I would like very much if you commented on. Those 7 things are:What did you like?What did you dislike?What should I change?What should I keep the same?Does it grab your attention/want you to read more?If not, how can I fix it..?Did I epic fail my Japanese...?Thankies~~ |
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-The Background was really awesome.. omfg I'm mad at you nao D:< And I like how the main character has a menacing expression
What did you dislike?
-You killed a black guy! D8<
What should I change?
-Make the dead guy into a white guy. Or a asian. JUST NOT A BLACK MAN O GOD NOOOO I LOVE THEM BLACK PEOPLE THEY'RE TOO AWESOME TO DIE!!! and try making the blood drops not all over the main character's face.
What should I keep the same?
-Background~
Does it grab your attention/want you to read more?
-grab my attention? ... .... the gun did. Make me want to read more? umm.. well.. I dunno <3
Did I epic fail my Japanese...?
-No, you epic failed english <3
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Like a hawk, I will sweep you away...
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...in my fleshy so-called talons.
so cool^-^
xDDD Btw, he isn't black. He was intended to be just a tanned guy... Lawls xD
I know, I know... Mah Eng sux. xD
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I patiently await the day when the tides will shift once again, the point in the moon's endless circular trek across black emptiness, when it comes my time to take flight, take off into the eternal darkness awaiting me.But will I remain in memory?
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I patiently await the day when the tides will shift once again, the point in the moon's endless circular trek across black emptiness, when it comes my time to take flight, take off into the eternal darkness awaiting me.But will I remain in memory?
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I patiently await the day when the tides will shift once again, the point in the moon's endless circular trek across black emptiness, when it comes my time to take flight, take off into the eternal darkness awaiting me.But will I remain in memory?
i would come in a kick both of their butts and win ^-^
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I patiently await the day when the tides will shift once again, the point in the moon's endless circular trek across black emptiness, when it comes my time to take flight, take off into the eternal darkness awaiting me.But will I remain in memory?
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Like a hawk, I will sweep you away...
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...in my fleshy so-called talons.
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